All Comments on 'My Aunt Sarah Pt. 03'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystaboo11 months ago
Could be a love song or romance novel.

If changed from May /December neighbors from incest could be a romance novel or movie. That is the standard I think of when critiquing a story.

Every man's dream whether it's a friend or relative.

Lukester10Lukester1011 months ago

Ok story but no offense but you need a new editor. I found multiple errors on the first page where there was dialog. "I love you. She said" should be written like this. "I love you." She said

Frankie1952Frankie195211 months ago

Fantastic tale, so hot n sexy.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Need more pls!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Pretty rammed exciting!

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