by JohnathanBouy
If changed from May /December neighbors from incest could be a romance novel or movie. That is the standard I think of when critiquing a story.
Every man's dream whether it's a friend or relative.
Ok story but no offense but you need a new editor. I found multiple errors on the first page where there was dialog. "I love you. She said" should be written like this. "I love you." She said