All Comments on 'My Beautiful Nightmare Pt. 04'

Wow, that was stunning! Mariano is without a doubt a strong dominant man with an intense obsessive personality, unfortunately he’s also supremely arrogant, selfish and careless.

It’s almost as though his world view of people is completely dysfunctional and he can’t relate to others, is he a broken little boy on the inside or just a complete and utter bastard?

It’s a bit like watching a disaster unfold in front of you. Your writing skills are astoundingly impressive, concisely building this framework of her emotional despair and desire. Thank you for sharing!

Tess (UK)

This story has entered tour de force territory. Superb writing.