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Click hereI remember I sat and watched the show they put on for me.
The whole time thinking, "Man, being the head of the household is TOUGH work."
Thank you.
- COMMENTS
HaydenDLinderover 1 year agoAuthorTO: MCMaineNudist, "But where was the filching?"
OMG! You are so picky! His Dad was slurping his semen out of his Mom's BUTTHOLE, man!
Now, I want you to go back and read this story again!
Not that that's much of a punishment for you. Ya sick little twist.
HaydenDLinderover 2 years agoAuthorTo Anon "It's not a story, it's verbal diarrhoea." I know right! Bwahahahah! Ohhh I'm so fuckin petty. BTW you need to go back and read my response to your comment on chapter 1. It's REALLLY good. :)
Anonymousover 2 years agoSo you wrote this story because some people panned your last story? This is how you motivate yourself? And this is the result of that "motivation"? It's not a story, it's verbal diarrhoea.
HaydenDLinderover 2 years agoAuthorTo Anon: "...Fyi, yes it is felching not filching, you fool."
-WHY- would I want to get that right?!
Anonymousover 2 years agoMmmm love a nice bit of felching, even better when it's a whores arse full of multiple punters cum. Anyone here heard of Kirie ;-) she's always ready and willing. Fyi, yes it is felching not filching, you fool.
HaydenDLinderover 2 years agoAuthorTo: iameasel, Eat a bowl O' Dick.
To Anon: "Simply awful." Uh, yes. Yes it is. But you have to understand. I don't actually like Cuck stories. I had an abusive childhood and the effect from that is any time someone tries to make me feel weak. I tend to get physically violent. So, stories about guys watching their wives get screwed just makes me angry. So, you are correct. This WAS awful. It was supposed to be. It was purely Troll bait so I could get to the Comments section because the LW Trolls REALLY pissed me off. I am sorry you didn't like it. I had a hard time keeping my lunch down on that last part too. If that helps any.
P.S. to anyone else reading this: If you ARE into these kinds of stories? That's fine. You have a right to enjoy what you enjoy. I just don't read them. In general... It's kind of a guideline more than a rule.
To Anon: "I thought this was going to be part of the first." (TECHNICALLY) it was? I mean just because Frank and Merrideth broke up in the first sentence doesn't mean it's not a sequel. It's just not a good one. :)
Anonymousover 2 years agoI did not get the second part. Why did you call it MY BEST FRIEND'S GIRL CH. 02? I thought this was going to be part of the first. *
iameaselover 2 years agoIf helping to dig the grave for LW to bury it under a port a potty you get a 5.
As for a good story, whether its the writing or the plot, well you a 1. Also I'd say your brave but the mentally ill can hardly be applauded for doing something they aren't fully aware of.
Try professional help, that would help with whatever is wrong in your upstairs. And, as an aside, you could take up needle point instead of trying to write something that brings about a result closer to emptying ones stomach than making a real mans dick hard.
And, i wont charge you for this either, that door knob, turn it either way and that closet door will open and welcome you into the real world. Love yourself for who and what you are, AFTER you get those mental issues looked into.
