All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Wedding Ch. 04'

WOW reader207, you've absolutely floored me with the number of emotions that you packed into chapter #4. Hope for what may happen between Jack and Devin. Then reminiscing about the nervous angst of beginning army life. And finally, the excitement of first-time gay sex with one of the HOTTEST hand jobs ever. But all that wasn't enough for you. You had to bring me to tears with those last three words, "I miss you...". So yeah, if one word can sum up this chapter, I guess it would be WOW. You're a very talented writer and I've loved reading all of your stories, but I think this one is probably my favorite. Thanks for writing it. MLF

Hot. This story has lots of potential if Diane truly wants Jack to explore his gay/bi side and Sara is ok with her best friend and her dad. These women are too likeable to have the men sneaking around behind their backs. Hope they can be open about their attraction and explore a real romance together.

Oh wow …. Good read. I hope everyone gets to be happy in the end ….

Wished for seeing more.

Wow wow wow. A story inside of a story. What a twist but not a twist? Backstory. Ah Jackson. So good to hear from you. “A little Italian meatball he was.” I’m breathless.

Please continue this story. It has great ‘bones’ to build a great romance. I hope you can find the time.

Am really enjoying your writing and this story, hope you continue with both.

keep going ,please!