All Comments on 'My Cousin Julie Pt. 02'

Lock the bedroom doors - From the outside ? How many code violations will that create? Maybe this is a prison of sorts?

I do not recall reading the first part, so I have no characters or background to go on.

A few typos (?) and dropped words.

I applaude your efforts for, only through continuation will your (writing) craft improve.

Please keep writing, you have potential !