by DerekGrant
If you’re going to write something so outlandishly cartoonish, can you at least make it entertaining?
Part of the appeal of LW is dealing with real people, not these ridiculous caricatures. This was about as erotic as a kick to the nuts. Sure, a few people might get off on it; but most of us just throw up and move on.
If only there was a Fetish category with such a simple name that even the underage kids sneaking on here thinking they are cool could find it...
Yeah, that was, without a doubt, your worst offering to date. And that's saying a lot, and none of it complimentary.
I ask any sane man, would a man be content being in Marks place? I am quite confident that only one in a million would. Mark and Mary never were truly married as they never consummated the marriage as required. What happened to Greggs marriage? Did his wife never see her husband? Talk to him? Attend his funeral? Was Mark ever allowed out of his cock cage? Did his penis suffer rotting due to the disgusting filth that undeniably accumulated around and under the insides of the cage? Was he ever allowed to masterbate at least? Did he miss intimacy with the cruel selfish slut he unexplainably loved? Did Gregg and Mary’s children see the dynamics of the weird hierarchy of their parents coupling plus one? Did they pay Mark the disrespect their parents did, sexual situations aside? If Mark had a chance to go back and live again would he kick that selfish evil slut to the curb and find a decent woman to share a true loving life with? Personally I would have dumped the slut the first time she got handsy with the asshole Scott!
I think Whackdoodle whacked you over the head with his comment, and rightly so! Couldn’t have said it better myself Mr. Whack!!!
good stuff, id recommend authors cuckytoher and throne if you ever want more masochistic inspiration.
At least Master Gregg had the end he deserved! Will the whore be next, getting a nasty STD from her ex-lover?