All Comments on 'My daughter gets caught stealing'

Bravo!!

Unfortunately not very well written. Thanks for sharing though.

Sorry, just not very well written. Thanks for sharing though.

Looking forward to the next instalment

3 Stars, a very weak story, were you watching the XXX store security porn videos while you wrote this?

Hi, Thanks for the feedback, I don't think it was my best work. Re-wrote it too many times.

Hey well I liked it. Can just imagine it happening in Ballies!

Keep trying... make us know the actors. Get us involved in the story. Read more porn and fantasy books... let your words make flowers open.

Our daughter Sophia was caught stealing money from the till at the shop she worked at down the road from where we live,it was her first job since leaving school,the shop was owned by a Turkish family which pretty much the whole village knew, it was a Saturday afternoon and there was a knock on my door,it was Jimmy as everyone knew him, Jimmy was the son of irdan who owned the shop,hello Mr Evans he said very politely,can I come in,I need to talk to you about Sophia? Yes of course Jimmy I said,I want you to look at this Mr Evans! Jimmy gave me his phone and I watched a video of Sophia with her hand in the till stealing money! I was shocked and apologised to Jimmy and said it won't happen again, that's the problem Mr Evans,its been going on for a while and I've estimated that Sophia has stolen almost £2000 . What can we do about it Jimmy I asked him? Please don't go to the police? I won't do that Mr Evans but Sophia needs to be punished, oh don't worry about that Jimmy I'll sort it out, I'm afraid it's too late for that Mr Evans,you see for me not to go to the police Sophia needs punishment from me! In what sense Jimmy? I'm going to fuck her Mr Evans if you don't want me to take this any further! But she's only 17 i said! Old enough to steal from me though yeah? Jimmy had me over a barrel and I had to let him do as he said, ok Jimmy when I asked him? It's Sophia's Saturday evening to work,she finishes at 9pm I want you to come to the shop and pick her up then! Why do you want me there Jimmy? So you can see what happens to people who steal from me Mr Evans . I couldn't relax all evening and as 9pm approached I told my wife that I was going to pick Sophia up,I pulled up outside the shop and saw that it was all locked,there was a piece of paper on the floor outside the door and it read,I've left the back door open for you Mr Evans signed Jimmy! I walked around the back of the shop and opened the door and saw a light on underneath a door that was opposite me! I pushed the handle down and saw Jimmy and his father irdan either end of Sophia! Jimmy was fucking her and irdan was getting his cock sucked by my daughter! Ahh look who it is Sophia? Your father! He's going to watch what happens to people who steal from us aren't you Mr Evans? Jimmy and his father tied Sophia to the table with her arms stretched out infront of her and her arse was just there for them to fuck! Not a little princess anymore is she Mr Evans Jimmy said as he fucked her, then his father had his turn,as you can imagine Sophia never stole anything else ever again