All Comments on 'My Daughter's Teacher'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Disappointing as it seems some people have mistaken Romance for the Erotic Coupling category. There is no romance in this story, just two people, who are barely acquaintances, fucking.

KinPAKinPA11 months ago

Not sure how this was romance…and there didn’t seem to be any actual character development. If this was chapter one or a retrospective, that’s one thing, but this had no romance or relationship in it.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hopefully this is just chapter two of a multi chapter romance, but a great start!!!!!

storycentralstorycentral11 months ago

Not really a romance, as those tend to be longer and also have more character development and conflict of some kind. But a decent entry in erotic couplings, though still a bit too short. Well written though as far as technical points go.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy10 months ago

You never know who you will meet a WDW!

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Comentarista82Comentarista8210 months ago

Other posters nailed it, that this would fit in Erotic Couplings, and even had light BDSM.

At best, the story was rushed and I echo what others said, that zero character development transpired, so nothing supported any chemistry here. This might have worked well as an introduction if 1) this had been 2 Lit pages long, with the 1st page being a long conversation that produced many things in common then 2) perhaps some spark flies and leads to the sex, ending the last 1/2 of the 2nd page and 3) the teacher should have been very aware of her surroundings, as that's a minimum of getting fired if she gets caught having sex with any parent of a student she teaches. Just not allowed. 1

chytownchytown10 months ago

***Good romance is one of those things when and where you find it. Thanks for sharing.

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