All Comments on 'My Dental Hygienist Pt. 03'

You need an editor, badly!

You can keep up that same thing in all of my stories? Maybe I do need but Anonymous comments does not help much. Maybe you just should give up reading my writings? I do not know were is the big problem? Many seems to like my stories so I think they are readable.

The context of the story maintains that previously established. The nend for editing has jumped massively.

Please, since English is not your first language, and you are doing so well with this story series, get an editor.

Would love to get get my teeth cleaned by your hygienist

Lots of broken English but the story is still very erotic, please continue

Like I have wrote I have had asked help for editing but seems that anyone is available.

And thank you for those have liked my stories!

Your story is very good and your English is just fine.