All Comments on 'My Ex After the Drive In Pt. 02'

Who cares if he went to Victorias Secret? You know how many guys do that? And if he’s embarrassed to be seen going to a sex shop, just order it off Amazon.

And having her go sans underwear at school isn’t naughty: it’s dangerous and she could be fired.

No fucking wonder she left his ass.

Boring. Why waste our time?

I found the heat turned down in this chapter. Role playing is fun in real life, but I was a bit disappointed that it went from her having sex with another man in the first chapter, to nothing but sexy underwear in this one. Oh, and, "...I want to her you make yourself come!" is but one of dozens of reasons why you need a proofreader. Thanks.