All Comments on 'My First Orgasms'

You did give us readers fun all the way and then cut it off where it most counted … ok we can use our own minds to build the outcome … but truth be told it is not the same pace or the special description you add to spice it up .. so you want more stars go back and do this story right and no cliff hangers ….

Potential to be a really fun story. Parts were rushed and the dialogue felt clunky at times. Also the italics were confusing. Sometimes they were thoughts, sometimes speech