All Comments on 'My First Session - A Fantasy'

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KinkyDom69KinkyDom69almost 3 years ago

I liked the patience shown to a newbie.

visioneervisioneeralmost 3 years ago

I don't normally read 2nd person POV stories, but I'm glad I committed time to this one. You achieve something difficult with this POV: presenting the story through the actions of "You", yet thoroughly exposing the emotions and vulnerabilities of, and making the story all about, "I". Plus it's always nice to experience the less intimidating side of BDSM, which you handle superbly.

You write well, and I look forward to another trip inside your fantasies.

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