by Littl1
I just finished reading your story and absolutely loved it. What was best about it was how you were able to express the feelings you were experiencing at different times. I especially thought the start was a great expression of your feelings. I also like the way the dom was able to read you and know how to respond to the way you reacted and to use the vibe on your ass...very sexy. I also like how he had you bring your own vibe too. Fantastic for a first story...please, please share more.
awesome story. love that and the writing. could have been a little longer.
but i found it very hot anf horny. i made up for what wasn't there in the story.