by EoghanDubhara
This is hotter than a twenty dollar pistol. Really, well done! I'm eager to read more of your stories.
I enjoyed ch 1 immensely, but this one not as much. I think ch 2 is too similar to ch1 in terms of scene, and action. The only real difference seems to be that ch 2 is all non consenting. I think the ambivalence of the consensual / non consent of ch 1 is what made it work so well. Also, try not to take the trolling too seriously. Sadly, some of us seem to have little better to do.
Contrary to what was said in some comments, this is a very very good story.
I gave it a 5- (4.6 of 5 = 92%, ☆☆☆☆☆-)!
Your stories are such a turn on. It's like you pinpointed a deepest fantasy I didn't even know I had.