All Comments on 'My First Trick'

by theWollstonecraftWoman

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djripdjripover 1 year ago

What a wh\\resourceful young woman!

Gazza6969Gazza6969over 1 year ago

Loved it, no" black is superior" or "what do you love", "cock", "WHAT"? " Big Black Cock Master" !

Nice change

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

pretty sure you don't understand the meaning of "whore" since that is exactly what you are. Make sure your next boyfriend knows you probably have several STD's!

theWollstonecraftWomantheWollstonecraftWomanabout 1 year agoAuthor

Mister Anon, I don't typically respond to feedback. But your moronic statement begs for a response. This is not autobiographical, and it isn't me. It's a story. Something your feeble mind can't get. Sadly, you're so stupid you don't understand the concept of fiction. In the virtual world, I created, there are no STD infections unless I say there are. Grow up, and don't be such a shtokh!

visioneervisioneer11 months ago

Sparse and world-wise-- I enjoyed your story. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice hot short story ending with a good lead into the followup. Junior year at UMass, first BBC, fun fucking

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

Short and sweet. I self-confidence of your character jumped right out.

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A bored house with a nasty mind and a penchant for writing my fantasies. Most involve revenge on a cheating spouse, a cruel boyfriend/husband, a demanding employer, or a woman who hurt someone. Other wanderings of mind include public sex, instant attractions followed by nasty ...