All Comments on 'My First Trip with Becky and Andre'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Meh

The writing is okay, but the story is very anticlimactic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
story plot

Subject was good, but needed to be longer. Too much time spent developing character for the story to end on page one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

NOTHING TO SHOUT ASBOUTT

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