All Comments on 'My Forbidden Fantasy Pt. 01'

Can't wait for the next chapter !!!

I need more of this right now

1. - how old Reyah currently .... 2. - how old this sister being currently .... 3. - sister's name

we're gonna need that .... 4. - also gotta give details sister's whereabouts while thing

went down .... 5. - guy's name also need give that .... 6. - guy's age also do need details ....

7. - absolutely zero chance beginning of story it's how their tension did begin . we'll need

everything this .... 8. - has something happened between the sisters . we'll need

whatever done .... 9 . - we'll need details about if something if whatever it's already

did happen . her sister along also this guy ................

if you gonna proceed do more . don't call the thing chapter two . especially if certain things

go down happened prior all this ..............................

regardless on the stuff i've said - became good became awesome

CrankThzJackInDaBox- all good points. The details will all be revealed as I release the next parts. I never really intended for these to be chapters, more-so just tidbits that will eventually get glued together properly. Thank you for the compliment. I look forward to releasing the rest.