All Comments on 'My Friend Drugged Me to Have Sex'

The poor grammar takes away from the story

As the other commenter said, the poor writing takes away any value to the story. Please keep trying.

Your concept was good. You were very short on details. It felt like you just wrote the story in a rush... but never went back to polish it. That would account for the mechanics and grammar errors. The story felt rushed and unfinished. You could have written the same story and taken 3 pages or more. Too short. You just need to take your time and polish your work. I think it has a lot of potential.

I liked the idea, but it went too fast. And it felt unfinished at the end.