All Comments on 'My Girlfriend's Little Sister Pt. 03'

Fucking hot. Can't wait for the second part. Great work.

PROOF READ!

Example - ""Yes," I answered, but I never got a repose anymore ..."?

Repose??

Just a short pointer, I am Swedish and English in not my native tongue. I apologize for all spelling errors and grammatical errors.

I think it was great, hot actually, I certainly got a hard on. Great stuff, the whole series. Can't wait for number 4

Super hot, not as good as number 1, but still very hot. starting on number 4 now.

Overall, good story and good sex scenes. Have a native English speaker proofread and suggest edits. At times, it is difficult to know who is speaking, as the quotation marks and paragraph breaks seem almost random.

But overall, a solid 4/5

Angus

Threesome with the sisters.

The sidelines are a bit distracting, the teasing with his girlfriends sister is hot

I LOVE the stuff with the sisters but skip past the other women. I just want Steve June and carol!! So hot!!

threesomes with the sisters

forget the other women they are an unwanted distraction