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Master_DoctorMaster_Doctorover 2 years ago

Not too bad for your first. I might suggest a little longer. More details and if you are concerened with mechanics, there are many people who will happily edit for you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like it. This series has huge potential. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Makings of an incredible series of stories. He could live out fantasies with wife and others

AlexiaAlexanderAlexiaAlexanderabout 2 years ago

This is very sweet and romantic. I hope the power does not corrupt too fast. A nice romantic mind control story can be a great read.

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I am a Good guy that wants to be Bad. The stories I write are about some adventures that my wife and I have had and some that may happen. They are basically true, with some embellishing. My wife can be very adventurous sometimes and surprise me as she has done in the past. I l...

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