All Comments on 'My Grandmother’s Cookbook Ch. 06'

Look, it's cool that you are writing this as a hobby and want the reader to ignore any writing standards, but this chapter is pretty atrocious and you really, really need an editor or proofreader. So many spelling errors, plenty of punctuation errors (you regularly screw up basic sentence quotations " "'s) and there are some truly hilarious english mistakes (the spelling homonym ones are sometimes quite funny too). There's so much of it that it takes the reader out of the story with a thud and mild annoyance (thoughts like: seriously, he missed that? Why didn't he catch that? Why didn't basic proofreading fix that? So many errors. Is this story worth it? )

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And the story is actually good. Get some help please. Be nice to your readers...

Thank you for your constructive criticism. I use 2 different spellchecker to find my errors. But sometimes they miss them. I have tried using an editor, but have not received any response. I will review the story for errors and correct them and republish. I like to write, but it that's me 3 times longer to edit a story than it does to write the original version.

Thank you for reading.

Love all your stories. This series definitely has great potential for fantasy. Please continue this storyline