by Tales_of_tea
This could have been so much better if it involved the housemate finding her and watching, joining, etc.
To be honest, I agree. But I wrote this for another website I post on, with the goal of keeping it around 2000 words. Another reason I haven’t continued the story already is that from this point my head was filled with a handful of scenarios including the two you suggested, but I was unable to come up with a scenario that I was satisfied with, so I’ve left it until inspiration strikes. I try not to force my writing if I can avoid it. One day this will get a sequel, could be tomorrow, could be in ten years. Like Coffee Shop Encounter and a few others, I have the start of an idea, but until I know where it’s going to end up I won’t be writing it. But thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to read my story.