All Comments on 'My Journey of Discovery Ch. 05'

Worth waiting for.

Absolutely perfect, it’s very well balanced, the characters are definitely believable and the entire chapter has been playful whilst still remaining very erotic.

Thank you!

Tess (UK)

Only 2 comments?? No expert in this field but I think it's very good and shows potential. I know you're still writing the later part but thought I'd start here.

5⛤

You write this as if you had taken the journey. Great job.