All Comments on 'My Journey to Submission Pt. 03'

by davetoyboy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please

add a disclaimer when involving piss play. Maybe it should be in fetish category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Golden Nectar

Wonderful twist, always enjoy reading the introduction to piss drinking from the dominant madam. Is this new twist going to lead to weekends with Karen's mom to submit to drinking her piss whenever she has to go to the bathroom? Whilst Karen goes thru alcohol rehab anyway?

ShadoweddesireShadoweddesireover 8 years ago
It was a good submission but DAMN

Don't just put piss in there like that but some warning before hand please.Im all about slaves and such but spitting into mouths and pissing is Gross and makes me gag.but over all good novel but don't split it off like that make it a whole book...

ShadoweddesireShadoweddesireover 8 years ago
Also please have some more realism.

Drinking piss I not safe too drink dosent matter what you do drinking piss is horrible too your body and will kill you.piss is all the toxins in the food you eat so it's like drinking all of the worst shit that comes out of your food.never drink piss if you can help it :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
One of the most unsexy stories I have ever read.

"Most of all was that she radiated a strength and eroticism that overwhelmed me."

This story didn't overwhelm me.

I don't mind reading about watersports if it is done correctly . This wasn't. Another 1 ☆.

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