All Comments on 'My Little Toy'

by koppin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
gave a 5*

loved it, keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Perfect

This is literally the best dom/sub relationship I have ever read, and I've read a lot. Keep writing! Please master!

SubmissiveDragonSubmissiveDragonabout 10 years ago
I liked it!

This was really good, please keep writing sir!

AllyLarkAllyLarkover 8 years ago

You write so well. The detail the flow of the sex the imagery is so clear I can see and feel this as a voyeur or as the character in the story.

Hands down the best master I've read about. He truly does know how to arouse her and he cares. I love how well youve communicated that he truly does care for and respect her with details of the attention he pays to how her body is responding and he responds to that wanting to please her. He's so patient and damn he held out for a long time. He can last and last.

Great story. Really enjoyed it and hope you're still writing like this.

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