All Comments on 'My Loving Sister'

Keep going please. Love a quickie like this. Hopefully they become a couple and make some babies.

Too short. You need to work and develop the characters. Keep going.

Good, but needs a little work, a little more why, a little more tension. Keep writing!

Deserved more than 1000 words, but I liked it. Definitely worth a second chapter, with a bit more romance. Thanks for this,

Good start....

Was this the outline for the story?

give your naughty sister a big fuck, give cum splash on her face please

I hope she's on birth Controle