All Comments on 'My Master Ch. 01'

Unfortunately, it was let down by some trivial errors that should have been picked up and corrected before posting. Spelling, grammar and punctuation might sound boring, but if you don't get them right you can easily alienate your readers. Please consider re-reading, and re-writing where necessary and submit it again.

Then it will be a five-star story. Thank you and welcome to Literotica. Four stars.

It would benefit greatly from an editors eagle eye, a few too many mistakes at present which detract from the promise of the story line.

Well done for a first attempt and 4 stars.