All Comments on 'My Master's Brother Ch. 20'

Next chapter?

You need to finish this story! aagh!

I am not going to read anything else you have written,

Another story unfinished, i have enjoyed your stories but I feel like you need to have some focus.

Did you know you have repeated the last 2 installments?

The first novella is self-published and is much different and expanded until the MC is in the dungeon at the club. I will finish this different version for literotica as well, but not until I am certain of the end of where I will take the books while figuring out what a publisher might be willing to accept.

I’ve never commented before but this is the first story I’ve read with the perfect blend of dominance/controlling and being in love/obsessed with the girl. Even tho they are in control It’s all about her, all for her, it just appears to be for them. Honestly if you made this into an actual book it would definitely sell xx no negative comments, even if you don’t finish it it’s still good don’t worry.

I’m dying to know the rest! Even bought the book hoping for more!! I need book 2!!