All Comments on 'My Mate Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
story

You should post this story on Wattpad many will love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Better and Better

Story, syntax, tenses, grammar, and flow are all getting better and better with each chapter! Really enjoying it, and proud of Jenna for having self-respect and demanding that her mate respects her also. So many stories are all: "We're destined mates and that's that. All is forgiven and forgotten." And suddenly the feisty heroine becomes a door mat. Can't wait to see how the story continues!

sexdrive101sexdrive101over 5 years ago
WHEN R U GONNA MAKE MORE!?! I LOVE THIS! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

OOFETH! CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE!

GypsytrampGypsytrampover 5 years ago

Really enjoying this, can't wait to see where you take it.

Relena1991Relena1991over 5 years ago
I love this

Please please write more I love this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Pls continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Don't stop writing! I love this story so much and I can't wait to find out more

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Few spelling/grammar errors, otherwise it's good.

A read over when you're ready to post wouldn't hurt, but the story is enjoyable

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 5 years ago
Good ideas but

the writing itself is poor. You used lots of disjointed, run on sentences and the writing just felt awkward. Perhaps an editor would help, or more practice studying conversational English.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
NEXT CHAPTER

I need the next chapter asap!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please continue

I am loving this story so much, please continue~

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Continue!

Please keep writing I’m hooked and need to know more! Yes and editor eoukd help, but your story has great potential!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Need part 4 please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Perfect

The story is too enjoyable! I want to know the rest!

Please don't concern yourself with grammar so much! It's decent!

I prefer MORE new chapters, not well written ones!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Cant wait anymore

Please continue the story soon. The wait is killing me

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Omg I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Pls continuation ASAP

Im dying to know what will happen

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What happens???

When's the next chapter coming out?? This always happens, u get the reader into the story and it takes forever for the author to get the next chapter. This story is so good 👍👍👍.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Update!!!

Please this story is very good and different. Please post

MORE CHAPTERS

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Stop taking so long

Come on post the next chapter already

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Next chapter pleazzzzzz

M hooked to the storyline.. please release the next chapter soon.. please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Next chapter pleaassee... its been ages

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Please post another chapter!

I check back often on this story. I love the imagery & think it is pretty unique in this category. Not the usual predictable take or the same typical plot. I really enjoy the style & hope you post more soon!

LiterKnightLiterKnightover 4 years ago

You mentioned in your profile that you’re working on a new story. Could I respectfully request that you finish this story as well? I really enjoy it and would like to see how they sort things out between them

carmenvampcarmenvampover 4 years ago
Why, why, why????

Why do I keep finding stories that I love with great characters and plot, but then they just end and I'm left hanging with another abandoned story?

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