All Comments on 'My Mexican Conejita in Chicago'

I found reading the story confusing. Who is telling it? Changing from first person to third person and back totally ruins the rhythm. I found I had a difficult time finishing the story because it was too disjointed. I totally understand if this is a first time effort and I wish the author much success with future attempts. A little bit more background and description of the characters would be nice. It’s like there was no effort made to fix misspelling or grammar.