All Comments on 'My Mom and Our Visitor Pt. 01'

Great beginning loved the whole story can’t wait for next part.

This was horrible. Rushed, poorly written, and just horrible. She's 5'8 he's 7 inches taller and her legs are longer....? So either a 6'3 guy is all chest and no legs or a 5'8 woman is all leg with D tits taking up the rest of her torso and she has no stomach.

rubbish

Great story... Interested in what will happen... 5 Stars... A very good start to a promising career in writing Literotica stories... Nicely done...

This made ZERO sense. Why would he invite a complete stranger to his house?

Don’t give us the crap about jerking off on his moms things, that’s just ridiculous. And 7 years is a lot older.

And rape is rape. It doesn’t matter if he was invited or not, call the cops.

Man, this was just shit.

This story awakened the depraved, sadistic part of my soul that I keep buried deep, in the manner of authors Tim Smith and CindysBob. I look forward to seeing just how far you are willing to take this.

Thank you, Part 2 is already pending :)

I yearn for a decent story but, once again, this was not it. This was garbage from one end to the other. Please spare us any more.

Promising start; but like someone else commented -- poorly written -- get an editor to smooth out the spelling, punctuation, and grammar. It has the makings of a good story, but it could be a great story if it is edited properly.

Ok, I got the message :)

Cancelled pending and won't publish no more.

Thank you for your time!

Don't listen to the a-holes publish it

wow dude, great start. Please continue

Really looking forward to part 2. Let the haters hate...publish it

LMAO @ANons.....Can't be bothered to register an account nor write anything for themselves...All the fuckheads do is bitch and moan about other people's writing...

Please post part 2. Don't listen to the haters

Agree with above! Don't listen to the jerks. I very much want to read part two. Can't humiliate/rape/beat/ Mom too bad for my taste! Looking forward to next part and many more to follow!!!

This a good set up but it should be one story

Gave you a 5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥.)