by darkride
Incredibly hot! You do an excellent job with describing the sexual tension and allowing the reader to feel it.
5 stars
Great writing as you held me spell bound. I go to sleep at night trying to imagine the next steps and wake each morning in anticipation of the next episode. Thank you
I don't go to sleep imagining the next step, but I do wake in the middle of the night thinking of it. Really want to see Steven do his mother and his mother go down on Sandy. Want the kids to be the interim master when master leaves.
This is personally my favorite chapter to date, so I'm glad that it's also received some of the best feedback to date. :)