All Comments on 'My Mother, My Love Ch. 02'

Other than the syntax issues and grammar errors, good story line.

Not a bad premise but way too slow paced....

It is commendable that you share your story with us. I cannot imagine the succulents of your mother. Fully understanding you need to finalize your lust for requited love, expressed through physical bonding.

Yor really should source a Proof Reader. It would truly enhance your experience for your readers. Surely your college would have someone that could assist with your syntax and grammer. For this person, reward would bexpect both in your growth and being first to read subsequent offerings.

Please continue; we need your story.

Excellent writing, many can't write & lecture on others writing.

Please don't mind & continue building your interesting story.

Waiting eagerly for next part.