All Comments on 'My Neighbor'

by Hipnotic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
No sparks No build up

Good concept.....no build up not descriptive enough. Not trying to be mean and critical just would love to see you improve your good ideas.

darkknight01darkknight01almost 15 years ago
pretty damn hot

Good job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Simply awesome. My wife and I had a nieghbor very,very beatifuly similar to him. Brought delicous perverted memories. Thanks. We want more.

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