All Comments on 'My New Girlfriend'

cant wait for the next post

Please make her dick bigger than him.

I would enjoy a whole novel about this, but I will be happy with however much you give us. I thank you for sharing your talent!

Sweet and well told.

xo,

Di

I just wanted to let you know that I really love this story please continue to develop this I can’t wait for the next chapter

i think a second chapter is needed

Mmm, the anticipation is killing me - you have to continue

This was a good beginning. I liked it a lot. Always enjoy a good secret TS story.

I gave it four stars. The things that kept it from being a full five are a few minor typos, and the fact that around about the time the caretaker showed up, you began to switch back and forth between past tense (the majority of the story) and present tense. The time shifting broke the rhythm of an otherwise enjoyable read.

That being said, I eagerly look forward to a continuation and the "big reveal".

The story so far was impressive. I definitely feel it needs to be ended on good notes. Please go ahead to pen down future parts to this storyline.

I dig it. Awful lot of typos, starting from the first sentence, and enough to make it tough to follow in a place or two.

My only other critique is the general "not coolness" of Hailie not coming clean yet. I mean; it shouldn't be a thing of concern, but it is for most guys. Gurls get hurt or worse this way; though they shouldn't have to worry so much.

Part 2 hurry up

Part 2 has been submitted

I’ve been a musician for years and like musicians, typos, incorrect spelling, and poor grammar Made by young writers can be less important than the overall continent of a piece, much like less than perfect intonation and small mistakes by Young musicians Who otherwise make valid statements with their

Solos.

Yeah, I enjoyed your story so far, and I’m about read the next part.

Are you planing next part?

WHAT A TEASE! I loved it though

Wonderful storyline and the two protagonist are absolutely adorable. I love the way the story is going. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. 💋

Veronica

Nice

Great story.

Just a warning to new readers. This is a cuck series which has Hallie cheating on him with over 2 dozen men, and being the cumdump of many orgies. And ends with him accepting her back and marrying her like a good little wimp. The tags with these themes seem to be conspicuously absent.

I don't mind your critic of the series but I feel it's unfair for new readers to the series to provide some misleading spoilers. I apologise for missing off those tags from the series but they're not the themes that I was aiming for.

To bisibi1: There is a way to turn off all anonymous comments to keep assholes like these from their uncalled for comments. Personally, I loved this start.