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"Ah, you're the guy that hit the lottery and left Steve looking for another ride to work. Yeah, I'm at my home office and your email just came in. I can open that design file directly that you sent. Give me a minute. [long pause]. Oh, I like your idea, I think I can do something similar to that and get you a quote by the end of the week. I will give you two or three options to look over and let you know what it will cost. How soon do you need them?"
"I want to give the girls' rings Christmas eve."
"I can definitely work that in. Let me see what I can come up with and get back to you. What metal would you like for the rings? I can do titanium, white or yellow gold or silver."
"If you can, show me something in white or yellow gold. They have blond hair and green eyes."
"Gotcha. I think I can come up with something that will look good on the ladies. Same metal for the man's ring?"
"Yeah."
"How much you wanting to spend?"
"I'll go up to $5,000 on each."
"I'll be in touch soon."
"Super and thanks."
"No problem. Thanks for thinking of me. Talk to you later, bye."
"Later." and we disconnected.
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- COMMENTS
Purplefizzover 1 year ago1, Too much sex at the cost of moving the story forward.
2, The spelling issues will eventually stop me reading this, story.
3, The writer just isn’t listening to any constructive criticism - from dozens of people. You sir, make commenting worthless, some of us try really hard to give constructive advice and/or criticism, it’s mostly well received and helps writers improve, but not always. Regards, Ppfzz.
Anonymousabout 4 years ago"by Anonymous
12/27/19
Great story . . . .
in spite of the spelling an grammatical errors. You really need a proof writer. Badly in need. The sex isn;t that great but with the story development it is not a problem.
Just Painful To Read with the 6th grade spelling.
Please, use a spell and grammar checker"
Yes, it's so easy to criticize, for those who are so perfect:
in spite of the spelling AND grammatical errors.
The sex ISN'T that great
Found this story just a few days ago and am getting through it and I am enjoying it. While it needs some corrections for spelling and grammar, that is life. Keep up the good work, I'm one that enjoys long novels so keep going for as long as you can. The one item you need to look out for is your and you're. Lots of "your" where it should be you're or "you are" but I'm less of a spelling/grammar nazi than some people are.
I'm working on my own story that covers 30 years and reading different series and seeing how they handle timelines is interesting and helping me shape my own story. Thanks for your story, I appreciate it.
Anonymousover 4 years agoin spite of the spelling an grammatical errors. You really need a proof writer. Badly in need. The sex isn;t that great but with the story development it is not a problem.
Just Painful To Read with the 6th grade spelling.
Please, use a spell and grammar checker
Anonymousover 4 years agoGood story.
Two minor spelling corrections to help your editing:
Herd not heard for the group of cows
Chameleon not camillion
Have driven through that area for years since my college days North of there....nice local color
arrowglassover 4 years agoAnxiously awaiting the next episode!
