All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 19'

Another fun instalment, thanks for asking the flash back.lol forward to many more.

Looking forward to more!!!

5 stars! I continue to be impressed with your writing, Thanks for your time and imagination.

Another great installment to this growing tale. JT

Hi,

I love reading you"re stories. I hope you will post more chapters.

Since I haven't seen an update after reading your bio message, I was concerned things weren't going well for you and your spouse. So please know that we are waiting patiently and wish you both the best during these troubling times. I'll remind myself that real life always comes first, especially since we read these stories for free!

where's chapter 20? Your bio says you submitted over a week ago.

Women who take pills for birth control, do not have periods! Lol.

There is never padding under indoore outdoor rugs....ever! How can the girls have thsir periods when they are taking birth control? Your storyline structure is good, but your reference to things a 18 and 24 year old would not ever be into, especially ex cheerleaders, is just not believable. You sound like you're a 50 something year old that knows nothing about relationships in the way you make Scott and the girls. Please do the research before you write a story. Everything else is great. The story is good and the structure it self is sound. You just need to clean up the mistakes and make Scott and the girls more younger in hobbies and music.