All Comments on 'My Only Talent Ch. 45'

I do miss Robbie having his Susie

I’m enjoying this story again so thank you for carrying it on I was fearful that it was not going to be finished.

I love the characters but didn’t expect to un this way especially Chrissy I didn’t see the slut coming from the character you described in earlier chapters but it’s all good I’m so looking forward to many more chapters.

Oh and I’ve gone off Suzanne big time and she used to be one of my favourites so please let charmecitas revenge be epic. Thanks man 5* please keep em coming.

Good follow up and continuation. Please keep it coming

First things first, housekeeping. 4 stars. This installment is not up to snuff for some reason. Maybe the quick turnaround time is the culprit. Maybe your editor is on vacation. I'm not sure what it was but it wasn't the quality writing I've come to expect from you. Typos, tense changes. All around odd stuff. Oh well every one has an off day.

I had a sit down with Johnny Cash and Woodie Guthrie. They both confirmed that John Henry was a steel drivin man. Not a pile driver. I know pickin nits.

Now the good stuff. Our erstwhile hero has always been reticent while talking to others about his sex life. But Chrissy seems to have him singing like a canary. Another Suzanne to burn Mr. Robert's. To ruin his reputation and trustworthiness? I sense bad things coming from this little vixen. Especially since he is a mere mortal for a few more months and can't see her scheming.

Really enjoying the math even though I have to look up the terminology.

Robbie missing his susie has made the story a little off,he needs to get it back either the same or while it has been away it has evolved so that he has better and/or new powers to learn maybe something that Nora helps him tap into that he didn't know that he was capable of maybe

Love being able to continue learning about Robbie etc. I really cant wait to see how Carmencita, puts Susie in her place. Also would love to see one last hurrah between Susie and Robbie. Please keep writing!!!

I'm definitely concerned about Chrissy's rapidly accelerating slutward trajectory.

Mostly I'm concerned that either she is going to hurt Robbie or, more likely, she is going to get hurt in her cock-hungry-quest, and that will cause Robbie damage somehow - probably in multiple ways.

The whole thing with Carmacita and Suzanne is kinda bizarre. Are we supposed to root for some form of harsh punishment for Suzanne? I hope that Alex doesn't get into deep shite when his wife kicks that hornet's nest... though she did seem to be aware of the need for discretion.

I'm similarly unsure of how to feel about Robbie's gradual acceptance of 'pussy wants'. Personally, I could never accept it, then again I'm monogamous with my fiance and she's hardwired that way.

Robbie's wiring is most definitely in conflict with his lover's wiring, let alone their 'wants'... how long until the double standard creates another two-male or other-male scenario, but without his talent to 'deflate' the situation?

As to the idiot that nit-picked spelling and tense - I'm very happy to give the STORY the 5 stars it deserves now, rather than wait for the spic-n-span, grammar nazi approved version in months.

Thanks again for sharing your time and talent!

J

I know some readers seem to enjoy getting all nit picky about any little thing but I have completely enjoyed every chapter so far. There were parts of chapters that I found I was unhappy with but that was due to the character doing things that pissed me off, which is a good thing since it just shows how much I have emotionally invested in this story and it’s characters. If that isn’t the mark of a well liked story then I don’t know what is.

Once again I would like to give a big THANK YOU to all those involved in creating this story for all the time and effort you have put into this. It has given me months of enjoyment and distraction which is greatly appreciated in my situation.

J.D.

Fucking pissed off. 1 single star because I can’t give less and still have it counted.

Just fuck Robbie adding to his stable. This no Suzi time was an ideal opportunity for the main character to gain some perspective and realise that the two hottest women on the planet were his unless he drove them away. Suzanne was proof that true love is true love and not just a word. Suzanne showed how saying I love you is meaningless when that woman just disappears with a short 20 second phone call demonstrating what love isn’t . While Nora and Lara demonstrate true love through words and actions, supporting Robbie after Suzanne, not fucking others even though he fucks whatsoever walks past, not pun king him for knocking up Nora but refusing Lara, AND HANGING AROUND IN THE WINGS WAITING FOR ROBBIE TO ARRIVE AND TO WORK OUT THAT THE 2 HOTTEST AND SMARTEST WOMEN SHOULD BE ENOUGH FOR HIM.

Why the fuck does dominant now pussy Robbie still fuck Chrissy? Remember how torn up and distraught Robbie was when Suzanne wanted extra guys? And Chrissy fucked a guy that Robbie doesn’t even like!

So Robbie has already DEMANDED that he be present for any of his children’s entire lives and not at a distance but right there married. Now he gets the one fiancé who didn’t want to get pregnant, pregnant. While the other fiancé that’s desperate to get pregnant he just ignores. He’s being cruel and Robbie has never been cruel.

It’s 3 years minimum before Robbie can live with Nora AND THEIR BABY. so his son will be 2 years old at a minimum before dad moves in. I’ll say from experience that bonding for a dad starts at birth and is very strong. A 2yo will bind to a dad that shows up finally but it’s not the same. The kid has already grown up so much by then.

The kid won’t remember stuff till 5 or 6yo but the bond won’t be as deep. A nanny will have that bond though. Bought and paid for by Nora’s dad.

All the while Lara the beautiful ever faithful submissive fiancé is just ignored on the side lines.

I'm very much don't like to share my woman. If I can't satisfy her, I won't take her as my woman after all.