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All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Too Painful

Chapter 8 was pretty unimaginative, and predictable for BDSM—as painful for the reader as it was for the girl. I ended up only skimming it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Early chapters enjoyed but just keeps getting worse

the early chapters were enjoyable but this just keeps getting worse.

I keep hoping the author who wrote the first 3 or 4 or 5 chapters will return

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