by MaximillianJr
I like all your stories! I always wish they were longer though, just so there was more to read, haha.
Extremely hot. Would love to read much, much more. Such compelling characters built up in the beginning make that delicious sweet/sour twist. Excellent writing, too!
Only critique I can think of is more detail/conflict for Gareth when he’s penetrating Alaric. I would have liked to read a little more about Gareth’s carnal betrayal in his the lustful indulgence. The way it’s written leaves lots to the imagination, which works well too.
More, please!!!!
Great story, but please don't leave us on a cliff hanger. Please finish the story!