All Comments on 'My Prince'

by MaximillianJr

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wirtydordwirtydordalmost 2 years ago

I like all your stories! I always wish they were longer though, just so there was more to read, haha.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Extremely hot. Would love to read much, much more. Such compelling characters built up in the beginning make that delicious sweet/sour twist. Excellent writing, too!

Only critique I can think of is more detail/conflict for Gareth when he’s penetrating Alaric. I would have liked to read a little more about Gareth’s carnal betrayal in his the lustful indulgence. The way it’s written leaves lots to the imagination, which works well too.

More, please!!!!

sealandssdsealandssdover 1 year ago

Maybe I am short-sighted. The prince seems to be a little feminine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I need a part two!! I need a resolution for this!!!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Please please please write a sequel this was so good

circleofcandlescircleofcandles10 days ago

Great story, but please don't leave us on a cliff hanger. Please finish the story!

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