by NikithaNair1996
You should make these stories longer instead of just a slow burn. 2-3 page stories with more pay off and add new scenery and people to make it interesting
I love the way you describe your body and how you expose it. I wish I were Ayush so badly !! :)
dear writer!your story was really engrossing,though last three lines of this chapter set the tone for next chapters,i will request you to drive the story on the path where Nikita evolve as more open,slutty and bold woman and Ayush becomes accommodating and more submissive .it will really give a more enticing touch i feel.will love to hear your viewpoint.(an avid reader of your escapades).
Pls add a more hindu girl muslim boy element to this story.... good story...