All Comments on 'My Seduction of Ayush Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

You should make these stories longer instead of just a slow burn. 2-3 page stories with more pay off and add new scenery and people to make it interesting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very Kinky

I love the way you describe your body and how you expose it. I wish I were Ayush so badly !! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
nice start.

dear writer!your story was really engrossing,though last three lines of this chapter set the tone for next chapters,i will request you to drive the story on the path where Nikita evolve as more open,slutty and bold woman and Ayush becomes accommodating and more submissive .it will really give a more enticing touch i feel.will love to hear your viewpoint.(an avid reader of your escapades).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
nice story

good effort!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good story

Pls add a more hindu girl muslim boy element to this story.... good story...

LabboyLabboyalmost 4 years ago

Yum. A very tasty story indeed.

Asura999Asura999about 2 years ago

bit overdone.. like fantasy took out the reality..

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Hi guys, i am an arid reader of the site and thought ill try a hand writing too. I love stories that have a lot of teasing and softcore so my stories would be more around those areas. Feel free to tell me is if i am taking too long to get my characters upto actually having sex...

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