All Comments on 'My Sister Anne'

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collin4xxxcollin4xxx8 months ago

Too bad you haven’t given her a baby…

ByteMe13ByteMe138 months ago

I wish I had a little sister. One that I could fuck and fill her with cum

GreWulfGreWulf8 months ago

The natural order of things.

mustang123mustang1238 months ago

This is a LOVE STORY

muskyboymuskyboy8 months ago

Outline, not a story.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It has a taste of love and when you are in love you wholdnt let your love to go away

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Continue your story.

OseekerOseeker7 months ago

Hope wife never finds out!

4 stars

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

get her pregnant

ScottishTexanScottishTexan7 months ago

Someone else already commented that this isn't a story, but merely an outline for one. I have to completely agree. Not much thought or effort was exerted to create this "one-page wonder". 🤔 What was the point of the 15 year age gap between the siblings? Instead of 45/30, if you made them 20/18 it has virtually no impact on the story beyond the big brother babysat and bottle fed his sister.

A whole lot of unexplored potential here. 2/5

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lovely story

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