All Comments on 'My Sister Comes to Visit'

First one of your stories that I read, having stumbled across it today. I thought it fun and well-written with an easy style. It’s my first glimpse of the characters in the larger narrative, and that was entertaining enough to keep me engaged. The gradual exposition of the sister’s’ relationship made me want more. It does fine as a stand-alone story, without needing to know everything about everybody. Thanks! Looking forward to exploring more.