All Comments on 'My Sister the Author'

therapy to get the germs and virus out of their mouths and her pussy.

Sickening

Shudder when the body shakes, as when one gets chills with the severe cramps and diarrhea following anal residue ingestion.

Shutter as in shutting the door to this dangerous ass play.

way to short and no plot and very little to do with writting

no comment just pure shit.

In fact, quite lame.

It's shudder not shutter!

A shutter is a covering for a window, usually external. What a woman does when she cums is SHUDDER. To many literotica writers don't seem to know the difference.

Not too bad. Maybe find an editor to catch spelling errors and other mistakes. Overall not bad for a first story.