All Comments on 'Slave Management 101-7'

I hope you can continue writing this story. We’re chapter 17 and no sign of the sister. It’s very risky doing minute by minute accounts as the author generally runs out of puff and this will be yet another unfinished story. Everything you’ve written has been enjoyable in its own right but I feel the whole overall story is off track. This whole beach scene excellent to read but how’s it’s beneficial to the whole story moving forward is unknown. Hope I’m wrong.

I may have missed it, but I have the impression that Emily didn't get a dose of sunscreen.

That seems to be a bit of health and safety hazard.

Thanks for reading and commenting. There's much more already written. I'm editing and writing at the same time. I pull out three chapters at a time for review, editing and publishing. Then, on advice from bad hobbit, I go over it at least 3 times, with at least a week between reviews. The story is actually almost finished, just needs review and posting.

Loving this series, keep up the great work!

You may be right. I'll have to take much better care of Emily in the future 😁

Am I dumb? Where is the first perspective?

1st person comes in the second part of the story, which is mostly written, but not yet published.

Fantastic. Love this story.

I am really enjoying the series! Thank you for writing it.

Very erotic, very intense, yet the story is not left behind, save for the sister.....