All Comments on 'My Sister's Keeper Pt. 05'

Another great chapter!

Great installment! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Think it was probably me misreading. I thought Barbara didn't have much time left and this chapter burst my dream bubble for her.

Keep it up. I am totally invested in the tales of James and Kate and their world. Good job.

So at this point we've got James who is clueless around women's desires -- OK - so typical for his age. (Yet he has good instinct with handling slaves, guessing his ability to read women will improve in short order.) Barbara and Kate are enslaved for the foreseeable future, but both firmly believe they'll have a place in his household. Emily is a short termer (I hope there is an epilogue or spinoff about her.).

I like the psychological twist where Barbara is setting up a wife for James. But now I'm curious about Yelana - A first person POV from her would be an interesting set of pages.

Thank you all again. You keep me motivated!

Enjoyed it, glad to read it, looking forward...

I have made a few comments that were more specific previously, but, now, just ...

Support, mate!

Love this storyline. James is a lucky man

Yelana?? will be a long term project but what will happen to Barbara? What's Kate's next move?