All Comments on 'My Son’s Room Mate'

5A new beginning!

Skank makes it obvious to her son. Way to fuck up what's left of your family.

Nice! Beginning, middle, and end. I like that in a story. My only critique would be to much telling. It's as if I'm listening to a wine mom discussing her sexual encounter.-------------------------------

If you search on YouTube the difference between "Telling vs Showing," in writing. You will pull up several professional writers doing 5 to 10 minute talks on the topic. Showing, will definitely improve your writing.

Alex needs to give mom a good deep fucking.

Wow! A dorm that has suites instead of just rooms. Living room, kitchen and two bedrooms. What school is that?