All Comments on 'My Special Birthday Pt. 02 - The Train Journey'

One year later they died of aids due to the unprotected sex she had with a random douchebag. But hey, at least your birthday was “good”

Can't rate, won't rate, want to see originals not copies so many new writers only copying originals a lot like music they never get it right.....

What is with all this cuckolding bullshit? And somehow the writer is trying to pass it off as a "gift" for a birthday. How sick is that? Good luck cuckboy enjoy your creampies.

There hasn’t been a station in Leigh since the 60’s…..still rubbish though

The three commenters who responded before me just don't understand how exciting the wittol lifestyle can be. Hey guys, I can confirm that a hot wife makes a happy marriage for those who understand it.

Well done! The build-up to sexual acts is every bit as hot as the acts themselves. The anticipation and the revealing, bit by bit, wets the boner appetite. Loved it!

4 Stars. Don't take these asshole comments seriously, cute birthday story, keep writing!

Good stuff! Btw, it's "wry".

If the TAGS don't apply to the story, why list them????? Use the appropriate tags for each part!!!!! To do otherwise is lying to the reader!!!!! There was no CUCKOLDING in this part, neither was there any SUBMISSIVE action/reaction!!!!! Scores will be better if the category and tags are accurate!!!!! These weren't!!!!!

It's waist ie: her waist, not waste ie: extra or leftover, otherwise hot story.

Hot wife May work if hubby is ok with it and getting other hot wives of his own . Good story here. A former coworker married 30 years at 55 gave his wife a gift on a vacation. In a college town far from home out drinking in a mainly local college bar they were invited to a house party after bar was closing . There were drinking games and fucking out in the open . A few of the guys were feeling up the wife all night and as was described the next day they all want a shot at the sexy older married mom . It started one with her then a second joined . The four hands and two mouths were too much in her drunken high state now being spit roasted . As they kept switching three others walked in closing the door . Two went right to sucking each tit while the black kid started fingering her ass . It became an all night five man rotation gang bang until falling asleep. He said he woke her flat on her belly with the black kid talking shit taking her ass . He pounded her must have shot up her ass then she turned over exhausted he put it in her mouth to clean as it hung off the bed and another slide in her pussy and fucked her for another 20 minutes until he came and she said she had enough couldn’t take anymore especially now sober realizing the impact of her getting gangbanged all night by guys younger than her kids and even her first black cock as all was a first for her. She had to walk naked through the house to find her clothes and it was naked guys and girls sleeping, fucking or just walking around naked . As she described next this beautiful guy walked up and said I looked for you and thought you left . He tells her he needed her bends her over the arm of the sofa and started to fuck her pulling her hair back now facing her hubby and this guy and he did have an abnormal fat long dick slow fucked her pounded her slow fucked again than pushed her to her knees and shot on her face and mouth. He said an hour later most left all dressed they made them breakfast and acted like nothing happened. Hubby had three different girls himself that night bring on a double dose of viagra but said it’s a one and done so hope you can remember but never do again . I lost track of him and wonder if they stayed together, probably and I said then and still feel the same now probably being around the age he was then I could never do anything like that. I’m way to possessive and jealous I can admit , sharing my woman is not my thing but it does make for a good story