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awyldsideawyldsidealmost 2 years ago

Wow, beautiful. Not a mean or nasty mistress. Perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good premise.

But rushed.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It was a fabulous story. Very well written and exciting. Not rushed at all. Sanchez and beautiful

Laoch59Laoch59almost 2 years agoAuthor

I feel like I did rush this one, a little bit, so thanks to the Anonymous user who commented. I look forward to working on more chapters of this story, and hopefully will have some better chapters soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It would be interesting to see how this story evolves. Does , she keep her pet. Or throw him away because She becomes bored with him. After He gives her so much love and devotion. I look forward to reading more of this story. But, I think She will dump him . Throwing him away, like trash. IRL anyway . Will she call him, Daddy ?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

We would love another chapter of this story!

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A married man, exposed to BDSM online, finding myself a true switch, with both a Dominant and a submissive side, both needing exploration and experience. Pansexual, openly exploring my sexual appetites!

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