All Comments on 'My Subservient Cum Pig Ch. 01'

to a series? Jane seems like a good subject for one. I encourage you to continue.

Part's of it were sort of hot, but then when you start with the cum pig thing. It turns me off.

My ideal master type would be a loving one. Still have the poker party, but say things like "Jane, is there anybody you want to fuck right now? " OR " If I was blowing your friend you could say, doesn't she look cute with a cock in her mouth?'

Maybe this story appeals to guys about 20 yrs old, but not most women.

I agree! you sparked something unique.you have a live wire here. Be a crime to call it. You have quite a bit of momentum for only two parts. I might have a remote idea of whats in store for her already but i love your writing n the prospect of the commission of plots growing all the more extreme is well worth the price-of-admission. I like the whole viral thing a lot n the tattoo was a nice touch maybe pull at that thread again or have her get an exotic piercing or two to help immerse her in her role. Combining underground sex stuff seems pretty unique n erotic when coupled wit her amateur porn status . I really liked the 'hardcore' flavor of these stories maybe i just favor that variety bc their affairs were oh so exciting n amusing.. anyway..by all means carry on wit this simply extraordinary series. You're on a ROLL!!

This goes out to my subservient cum pig BeardyG... xx lots of love ;)

There's a pig here, but it is not her.